1. Personally, I like the Kandinsky painting better than the Pollack. Kandinsky uses very bright colors that make the painting have a happy and positive feel. He uses geometric shapes and patterns to create a modern feel that is pleasing to the eye. There is a lot of open space in his painting and the space is not crowded.
2. The Kandinsky painting is more pleasing to the eye. This painting has very bright colors that create a happy mood, which is pleasing to the eye. The colors in the Pollack painting are very neutral and dark, creating a boring, sullen feel. The Pollack is also very crowded and does not have a lot of space, which makes it less pleasing to the eye. The Kandinsky has a lot of open space, making it more pleasing.
It's interesting that you see the Pollack as crowded. I think to some people it may come across as a unified piece and not a collection of many crowded things.
ReplyDeleteDon't forget to include a comma with the conjunction if what follows is an independent clause. "There is a lot of open space in his painting [comma] and the space is not crowded."
Nice analysis overall. :)